Creative Writing

WALT:  write a piece of descriptive writing.

Success Criteria

We chose an activity at Curious Cove that we really enjoyed and we wrote about it. We tried to use words that would create an image in the readers mind.

Trampoline

I hop on the tramp... bounce bounce bounce. People  tell me back flip, ok I spin it. I land on my head! I try again I'm close I'm going sideways and putting my hands down. I try again, I land my knee. I try again, on my knees again. I hurt my back I get back on...  I LAND IT!!!  The breeze in  my hair  felt good that was my first backflip. My favourite bit on the trip was the trampoline because I landed my first backfilp.